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I was born in Gumi, but I was raised most of the time in Seoul. So my hometown is Seoul

사용자님의 문장은 '대상 + 상태(be) + 당하는상태(P.P) + 전치사' 등의 구조를 사용하여 출생지와 성장지를 설명하고 있으며, 마지막 문장에서는 '대상 + 상태(be) + 명사' 구조로 고향을 명시하고 있습니다.

"문장 자체는 훌륭하게 작성하셨습니다! 이제 'from' 패턴을 활용하여 출신을 표현하는 연습을 해보면 더욱 좋습니다."

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hey I'm from where you from

I was born in Gumi, but I was raised most of the time in Seoul. So I'm from Seoul

I was born from Gumi, but I was raised most of the time in Seoul. So my hometown is Seoul

I was born from Gumi , but I was rized almost time in Seoul. So my hometown is Seoul

This is mine from here to there

I'm from korea

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