'fall in love'는 '사랑에 빠지다'라는 의미로, '인생이 힘든 순간'이라는 상황과는 맞지 않습니다. 또한, 문장의 구조가 'the moment when [상황] is the hardest'가 아닌, 'The moment when [상황] is when [결과]'와 같이 연결되는 것이 더 자연스럽습니다.
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the moment when i fall in love is the hardest.
'fall in love'는 '사랑에 빠지다'라는 의미로, '인생이 힘든 순간'이라는 상황과는 맞지 않습니다. 또한, 문장의 구조가 'the moment when [상황] is the hardest'가 아닌, 'The moment when [상황] is when [결과]'와 같이 연결되는 것이 더 자연스럽습니다.
"관계부사 when 패턴을 사용하려는 시도는 아주 좋았습니다! 다음번에는 주어진 상황에 더 적합한 내용으로 문장을 구성해 보세요. 조금만 더 연습하면 완벽하게 해낼 수 있을 거예요!"
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i am wating the moment when i graduate this class.
yes i am. when i was child, my first love had gone far away.
my best part memory is when my kid born
he missed the flight when he talked someone.
he missed the flight when he had talked someone.
he missed the flight when he had token someone.
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