어려운 상황을 when으로 표현하려는 시도는 좋았습니다! 관계부사 when의 구조를 조금 더 연습하면 완벽하게 사용할 수 있을 거예요.
문장 시작에 'yes i am'은 문법적으로 어색합니다. 'when i was child'는 'when I was a child'로 'a'가 필요하며, 'had gone'은 과거 특정 시점보다 더 이전의 일을 나타낼 때 사용하므로 여기서는 'went'가 더 자연스럽습니다.
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yes i am. when i was child, my first love had gone far away.
문장 시작에 'yes i am'은 문법적으로 어색합니다. 'when i was child'는 'when I was a child'로 'a'가 필요하며, 'had gone'은 과거 특정 시점보다 더 이전의 일을 나타낼 때 사용하므로 여기서는 'went'가 더 자연스럽습니다.
"어려운 상황을 when으로 표현하려는 시도는 좋았습니다! 관계부사 when의 구조를 조금 더 연습하면 완벽하게 사용할 수 있을 거예요."
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i am wating the moment when i graduate this class.
the moment when i fall in love is the hardest.
my best part memory is when my kid born
he missed the flight when he talked someone.
he missed the flight when he had talked someone.
he missed the flight when he had token someone.
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